Chapter Thirteen: The Hook is in

Wow, is RW screwed. Well, yes, he was, but now he's really up the creek. It's very odd to have the characters directing the plot. I mean, if they were any stronger, RW and Summer would be doing the typing. We are! No, you're not. Look DEEP into my eyes.

Okay, okay, maybe I am channeling imaginary characters. But they're doing a good job, so I'll just get the hell out of the way.

Writing some of the erotic scenes are difficult for me; I don't want this to turn into a boy's only thrill ride. I'll check some of it out with a writing group and see what they say.