November 08, 2004

Chapter Fifteen: It's About Choices, Stupid

I gotta hand it to my characters: they are doing a much better job of writing this than I ever could. I'm still worried about flatness in the dialog, but if I stop to edit now I'll never finish this sucker by the end of November. Closing in on 20,000 words -- will make it tonight!

RW gets to make a choice in the story, for a change. Not a reactive one, but deciding whether he'd rather be killed or have someone killed to free him from his pursuers. Fits in very nicely with one of the Jewish ethical standards of not letting someone be killed instead of you. I wonder what he's decided?

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