Chapter Eighteen: Enter The Thippah'n
Okay, the cat's out of the bag, and RW is getting his eyelids pasted open. The dialog, the camisoles... the 20,000 word mark! (Okay, so why should my characters have all the fun?) Things should start moving more quickly next chapter. More characters, more action, maybe a few little things like, I dunno, saving their asses from exposure?
We'll see. RW needs a new name, and it would be cool for Misty to show up at some point. He'll need to be placed in a herd at some point too, and that should be an interesting experience as a human who's in the know. I wonder who crews the ship, and how they handle feeding on board? It must either be a big ship, or have one hell of a harem deck
This doesn't sound like it's making sense to an outsider. The heck with them all...

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